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~Blow~

There was a good idea there. But it wasn't well exploited to me. It would have been better seing a bit more of the face on the right. It would have been necessary to see some movement in the picture... Why not with a longer exposure time?

Difficult isn't? We also tried to do this (see my folder), but also dit not catch it completely. We keep on trying. (You too?)

The problems the comination of the blowing, the movement of the flower and the marcro view.

My biggest problem with this isn't the lack of motion but rather the background. First, it's crooked, falling off to the left pretty severely and second, the objects in your background are too angular and pronounced and take the attention away from the subject. Reshoot this with a more ordinary background and I think it will be vastly improved.

I agree for the background, I don't really like the colors either, this photo has been taken on a cloudy day It is obvious, maybe try to take it with a different lighting