mythical world

Mario: The original image has already been cropped by the photographer, since it is not in the proportions of a DSLR. Final composition has absolutely nothing to do with being at the scene at the time of exposure. In all aspects of design it often takes a fresh second pair of eyes to point out any possible deficiences. In the existing photo the curve draws the viewer into the image at the top right corner, and then brings you down to the bottom left corner. The horizontal golden reflection in the bottom curve reinforces this directionality and introduces the viewer to the same coloured golden reflections of the vertical structures which begins to move your eye upward. Then the eye follows the two tall blue reflected buildings to the light blue sky in the top left corner and then either leaves the frame or is stuck there looking at empty space. In my suggested composition, by removing the empty blue sky in the top left corner, and the left most building reflection, the eye is lead upward and back into the image by the tallest reflection. This leads you back to the start of the sweeping curve and right back through the image in a clockwise rotation. The blue sky to the right of the main tower is a blank space of good proportion to balance the small busy area of golden building reflections. There is plenty of indication of what the main subject is without having to delineate both sides of it. I am aware that the suggested crop is slightly skewed to the left but unfortunately so is the original image. The shorter golden tower reflection at almost dead centre of the image should be vertical, but it is off by several degrees, hence the off kilter appearance of both images. I attempted to correct this, however the results were not acceptable to the overall composition.

 

I only spend this amount of time reviewing an image when I know it is excellent to start with! A few very minor tweaks can often make an image even better. I provide the photographer with a different view of his/her image that they may wish to refer to, or not, the next time they are composing a photograph. I apologize for not being more specific in explaining my thought process in my original post.

 

Make no bones about, it this is an excellent image and I rated it that way. Take care, John Crowe.

To my eye, this is an outstanding image. The clarity, color, and comp combine to make it truly exceptional. Congrats!

sience fiction in the ears:-)) good pic, i like it, roman

another great shot!!

 

Compliments

I see a beautiful photo. Frequently we've seen images of skyscrapers depicting the "cold, cruel city", the place where no one connects. However, this is very lively and colorful, and the reflections are inviting and fun. I like this as is, without the suggested crop. :)

and !!!!!!!!!

wow! excellent !

Damn dude...your still on a hot streak..Really well done.

Great shot

I love your work. I'd love some pointers one day. If you are ever haging out around Deerbrook mall area, give me a call. :-)

Your heading for fame with pictures like these.. Astonishing!

this is really a stunning and unusual photo! I love it - caught my eye immediately, great use of lines and curves here in addition to great colours!

 

I would definitely love to borrow two of these extra eyes to take such a picture. congratulations !

great shot and great color. thanks

great composition...a bit more depth of field would be better imho...

wow! is that really the Houston skyline?

i love the blue tone and the way you used lines to direct the eye.

Great composition,lines and colors. Love it ! Best Regards, Julayne :)

 

The tighter crop tells a different story. For me it is more compact and directly about the Houston skyline.

 

On the other hand, the photographer's crop has more of a mystic or fantasy world feel. The primary building framed by sky helps the imagination rise above the picture frame, an infinity moment. That expansiveness is further highlighted by the great curve on the right, which in the tighter crop has less impact.

 

A provocative and beautiful shot!

Perfect composition, perfect exposure - superb!

 

Foureyes, because you're pointing up at the bright sky, did you meter from the sky or use a polariser?

definately one of the best archetechual shots ive ever seen. great job.

very nice capture. you have pretty good eyes for square format

Very nice indeed. I love the color and composition.

I can see what your saying about the Dali reference. The distorted images are great, although I wish the color in the sky could have been brought out more.

urban geometry at its best! regards, cb :-)

Good composition. Congratulations.