A subway I walk through EveryDay

Any advice will be appreciated.

I noticed the one guy in focus sitting against the wall, but in my inexperienced opinion (so take as little notice of it as you wish) he is in too much shadow to be the point of interest. The people in the background are where my eyes are drawn to and they are all out of focus. This could be a great urban scene but for me, it misses that mark as the points of interest are confused by the focus issue.

I'm inclined to agree with Steven, I think the image would work better if the subjects in the background that are highlighted were on the focal plane. I suspect that you wanted to the man leaning against the wall to be the point of interest but there are two many things that distract the eye from him. Try to change your position to get a more focused composition. Or if oyu are bolder try to get closer to the man lying against the wall.

I like the image with the background out of focus actually, the image is more appealing, it could be about any day, not just the day the photo was taken. I dont know if you intended the background to be in focus, but i like the image as is.

I like it. The color is interesting too. I think the out of focus elements of the background make them more wirey and interesting in profile and looking like more abstract beings. Since you walk through here everyday work on this theme more. Wo hen xihuan. Hen hao kan.

I like the out of focus people in the background. I'm not exactly sure why. The silhouetted, out of focus figures make them look almost as if they could be the same person just copied over and over and going about different tasks. I think the scene being out of focus makes it appear to be busy or bustling without it being too cluttered at the same time. I like it a lot.