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This is an artistic picture I got in the middle of a studio session.

It was taken using Tri-X film and enlarged on multigraded paper using

filters to elevate the contrast

I love the idea! The use of a short focal length makes the hand appear very large causing it

to compete with the torso. Unfortunately (to my

eys)The shallow DOF leaves the hand out of focus. I would have everything in focus or

only the hand. The detail and size of the hand

would be such a great counterpoint to the smooth modeling of the torso.

I think the way that shadow on her left side cuts into her and distorts her body is very unappealing.

The shadow works. It's a nice relief from the common boring nude female shot.

I like the shadow, but the hand is a little distracting. Nice grain in the skin of the stomach.

 

 

The image is just wonderful, and enjoy looking at it. But, it still needs more contrast, I'm afraid. Stare at the images highlights that have no detail. Make sure there is no neutral gray just laying there, taking up space. Black areas with no detail should be black, the same as white areas with no detail should be paper white. If you're using gels, you may be getting the best of what you can. But, in time, try to get your hands on an actual color head that can allow you to adjust minute amounts of contrast. When you dial in contrast in your printing, you'll be laughing at the other's who haven't mastered it.