havanai 0 Posted April 13, 2004 Saw the nice light on the colored balls and was pleased to capture the little girl on the left to give the composition a human element. Would welcome your commments. Link to comment
john_curran1 0 Posted April 13, 2004 I like the balls and the colors. I'd get rid of the bowlers in the background and get up close with a "still life" of those balls. Link to comment
nino1 0 Posted April 14, 2004 Kurt, I think it would have been much better if you had put in the frame the entire scene in the background with a vertical framing. In this shot I don't understand if you're interested only to the balls or at the background scene too. Ciao! Link to comment
guido_fulgenzi 0 Posted April 14, 2004 In my modest opinion Kurt I would focus the scene on the bowling balls wich they have an interesting colors and light,the background distract me. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted June 23, 2004 I like your inclusion of the background there as it adds context... perhaps even more of the background would be an additional option? You should try brightening and drawing more attention to the little girl... Link to comment
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