johnorban 0 Posted April 8, 2004 Comments and suggestions are appreciated. Thank you for viewing! Link to comment
neha 0 Posted April 8, 2004 I love all the detail in this photo and the simplicity of it. Great job. Link to comment
janwillem 0 Posted April 8, 2004 Beautiful, but rather strange that the long sheadows are not completely covered? Link to comment
derek_prinsloo 0 Posted April 9, 2004 I like it! The fact that there are three screws and only two shadows gives it an odd feel. But you can't really do much about where the sun is, eh? Great colors and detail. I'm curious - what is this from? What's the "bigger picture"? Link to comment
johnorban 0 Posted April 9, 2004 Thanks to everyone for commenting. This photo was taken at a scrap woodpile at a construction site. It was very late afternoon which accounts for the long shadows. Link to comment
leslie_russell1 0 Posted April 9, 2004 I love the detail and the color. I also love the composition...all the lines leading of into infinity. Ver good. Link to comment
dominiquedodge 0 Posted May 31, 2004 John, I hope to have time to view all of your photos and comment on many. I'll start here, with a subject that I might have shot myself, if I'd spotted it (I love, wood and rust, not to mention shadows). The overall is great. It has a bit of a puzzle in it with the three nails two shadows idea, which I like very much. I also like the way the shaodow runs parallel to the grain of the wood. A couple of things bother me (a bit) though: I find I'd prefer a more rectangular format stretching over a bit more on the left, with sharper nail heads (more DOF). Still it's good, well spotted and well executed. Did you do any postshoot burning in the corners? Link to comment
johnorban 0 Posted June 1, 2004 I appreciate your thoughful critique. The DOF problem with the screw heads does detract from the image, but since this was done with natural light as the sun set, it was too late to reshoot once I realized the problem. I did not burn the corners, but I did aggressively adjust levels to bring out the grain and make the most of the light and shadows. Thanks again! Link to comment
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