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Just looking for some constructive criticism.

Nice pose. I like the lines you've drawn with her body. However, she looks annoyed. And the lighting is a bit harsh. Also, would like to see her whole foot.

I'm usually critiqued by our Photo.net friends because my lighting is too smooth (usually a combination of natural and fill light). I like the drama here ... expression could be more neutral, I tend to agree.

I like what you've done. Could you tell me more about the equipment you used? Camera, film, lens, lights? Also, what did you use as the floor and backdrop?

I really like the lighting here and colors.