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A painter in the market place in Dominican Republic, what do you

guys think.

i like this photo, i would also be interested in seeing it in color, if it were shot in color of course. My only suggestion, and take it for what its worth, is that the upper right hand corner is a little distracting. I think it would look a little better if it were cropped just enough so that the white wouldnt be seen. not too much, just enought to shave off some of that distraction. just my opinion. good job....

I would consider zooming in on the man. His intense look is very appealing. For me, he draws the viewer in to his focus.

Maybe this way looks better

Thanks for the suggestions, now that you guys talk about it, I do agree that maybe cropping off a bit of the top right or maybe burning it a bit darker would help the photo.

 

And the photo was taken in B&W film, so there won't be a color version of it.