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my first 'portrait' posted, any comments...

For your first posted it is good. ok it could be a little more in focus, but I like the balance.

If I remember, I had my tele racked pretty far out and the aperature as wide open as I could to get the shallow depth of field and blur the background, but as a result not as sharp. Do you think stopping down a bit would help or just a little out of focus?