Swans at Dusk

Swans and ducks in Cambridge, England at dusk along a canal.

please re-size for easier viewing... focusing on one subject would help, not so much distracting elements. try to get at eye level with the swan and throw the background out of focus with shallow depth of field - that would result in a much stronger composition. Also try not to overexpose, you lost a lot of detail in the feathers (blown out).