Marin, in studio.

comments welcome

skin tones are wonderful. Love the eyes, could have come up with a better perspective, but this works fine. Nicely done.

I was going to say something about the photograph, but my eyes keep getting drawn to here lips. Someone kiss that girl already!

classic! although perhaps wanting a little more light. And I would have used a catch light for the eyes. The stray reflection on the eye is unflattering.

I am commenting on this without having seen anu previous comments or ratings. (Your included!)

 

It is OK! When I see a portrait this close, I always think it is a good idea to ask the model to tilt her head so that her eyes are at the same level!

 

 

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I think it's a good photo, but there are some things that could be improved.

 

I also think the reflection in the left eye is distracting. The lips could use some color as well because they fade into her skin color. This seems overly pale--not warm enough for my taste and could use more color in the eyes and cheeks.

The eyes - they capture the attention and want to steal my heart! Lovely girl. I only have one nit-pick, and that would be that it seems to me that her collar (the black triangle patch in the lower right) is not in harmony with the rest of the image and should in fact be on the lower left to balance the dark wedge of hair in the upper right. We all see different aspects. The important thing is having fun! :-)