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Please let me know what you think about this shot.

 

thanks.

David, Original composition & it conveys the motion of the break nicely. Would be desireable to have the 'opponent' looking down at the break from the right third of the frame (between this table & the next). Just one opinion. Best, LM.

Gritty feel which is appropriate for the shot IMO. Good capture of the motion in the break.