Dead End

This is from my 5th roll of film, and my first roll of slide film. I

really liked the sign and its desolate appearence, especially against

the background of the wall and the train and the barren alley. I'd

just like some comments on how to improve. Thanks!

Not bad, but the roadbed is overexposed a lot and seems to be out of focus. Had it been in focus and better exposed, it would have been a lot better, I think.

more depth of focus to show the hidden meaning of dead end.