On the edge

I think it is very, very good. You have captured a moment and the mood is very well conveyed. If I dare to come with comments I think the strand of hair covering her face is too thick, hiding too much, but I like it there. Also, the persons, especially the girls head and to some extent also her dress, blends too well with the background. Some separation light here could perhaps help. But this is far better than anything I have done so take my critisism lightly.

Hope to see more from fellow Swedes!