The Smile ..

I attended with one youg lady the restaurant last week .... and the

result of my improvised photo you can see here .. :o)

A beautiful smile indeed. I like the composition, it may have been a spontaneous improvisation, but it is very precise, with the nose coming from the upper corner. I'd perhaps burn the hot spot on her nose and consider darkening the far top left corner a fraction to stop the nose leading the viewer's eye out of the picture.

I like the choice of DOF used here, tones and composition very nice also.

It has a simple elegance that's very appealing. Nicely done.

WOW, I love the lighting, great job. Would like to see more of you work.

Very good idea, which also works well... Beautiful expression on her face. Maybe just a little bit more light in the lower part of the pic would be my suggestion, because now her head (in my mind) seems to be sligthly separated from her body.