nyc subway cars Coney Island Train Station

Any advice will be greatly appreciated.

Thank you.

Your eyes are lead into the photo very well but you need something to see at the end. I found myself searching to see what I should be looking at in the back of the photo.

Kind of like this. It'd be worth going back and trying for a sunset reflecting off the tin roof.

I don't understand the low ratings this image got. In my opinion it is an effective pattern and my only criticism is that I would like to see either more simmetry -straightening the center line- or a more pronounced slant. Unusual and imaginative point of view. Good work. Not all pictures need a formal subject to be good.