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Zoe & Rhowena


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Session 4, learning a bit each time I hope lol!The proofs are at www.pbase.com/kurvitasch/two_girls


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Trying to produce a 'soft' look which I think is getting there, not

sure about the cropping though.

Constructive opinions welcome as always!

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Zoe is getting a fair number of pictures posted.

I've got a folder of pictures from of her and Rho before the main session started on Sunday - looking at your pbase stuff looks like you were there after I left.

Neil white also has some of Zoe in Wales

This is quite nice, though I wouldn't call it soft lighting - it's going bug me for the rest of the afternoon because it reminds me of something and I can't think what. The crop is a bit odd, becuse you're keeping Rhowena's chest out of shot, but it feels like her arms need to be completly in it - which would mean either an odd aspect ratio or some dead space at the top. That arrangment of the arms is worth a bit more experiment on another day.

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Thanks for your comments, the softness I meant doesn't really show at this resolution, more a sort of glow. I have been following your work - saw the pix on Zoe's site, I guess we will meet eventually, small world! The crop was bugging me, although the framing effect of the arms was the idea and I think it works at that level - dunno, maybe this would work better with a mixed couple?
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