ed_boucher 0 Posted January 21, 2004 All critique welcome. Am I merely pissing in the wind? Link to comment
jeremy_podolski 0 Posted January 21, 2004 My gut reaction was that I like it. As I look closer I see one difficult aspect to reconcile - the lights above her head give her a nice backlighting, but the row of lights that run right into her head are simultaneously distracting because of their placement. If there were a way to get the backlighting but not have her head the lights lined up, that would be ideal. I do like the strong lines throughout. Wish her face was sharper (her arm looks sharpest to me), but that could be the scan. Link to comment
jeff d 1 Posted January 21, 2004 This one is very powerful. She appears to be almost confrontational in her attitude judging from the eyes. The aperture was open a little too wide for this one. This explains the overexposure. Take Hollie back and get another shot using a few different f stops. Experiment! This has real potential. Let me know if you take more shots, as your work has real guts and grit to it. Please stop by and take a look at my latest effort. Thanks, J Link to comment
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