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Perhaps just a bit overexposed her right side face and her wrist,however very nice and sexy to see.

I agree withthe over exposure. I would have cropped it closer - this model is very pretty and her eyes/face are really the focus of attention but her chest keeps dragging the eye down to too close to the edge of the image.

Beautiful Juan - everything works!

thank you, thank you, I am learning thanks to you guys!

slightly more contrast than i prefer. the comment on the overexposed i agree with and also think this a good pose/composition. well done

I would prefer a hairlight so her hair had separation from the backround - unless you intended it to blend in.

Lovely lady,the slight overexposure does not bother me at all,the bright white skin tone is a nice contrast to the blocked background here.I do think cropping at the wrist and just above the hairline would make for a better composition though.

I don't think its overexposed, I just think he he blew out his details by over "contrasting" in photoshop.

I agree with the other folks who comment on the contrast on this otherwise lovely image...it's much too contrastry--and the image suffers, as a result. The model is lovely--the image is nicely composed--but there is too much detail lost--and the overall effect is harsher than this beauty (and your image!) deserves.

 

If you're Photoshopping--try using layer masks and levels to adjust your contrast, and paint in more contrast in the areas you want "snap" in (eyes, mouth, etc)--but don't paint it in on the aleady dark areas.

 

I would've rated this image higher, if it weren't for the contrast issues. :-(

 

(The photography is just fine, though! :-))

Actually, I like the contrast, but I would I remove possibly just a little of the frame above the head. You have an excelent rapport with your models.