koval 0 Posted January 13, 2004 A few elements imho lower the rating.I would suggest to : use fill in to get better contact with the model. Sharpnes seems to be not exactly on her eyes , that would be good if it could. The right hand side edge has a black stripe which is not needed and can be easly cropped. Hope it hleps. All the best . PK . Link to comment
behemot3 0 Posted January 17, 2004 I know - the right side should be croped tighter - and it will be. Any other comment apart from missed focus ( not on the eyes) are welcome thx Link to comment
w. roger keagle 0 Posted January 17, 2004 Better shots to come of this sweet looking lass. *R* Link to comment
science 0 Posted January 18, 2004 I think this is a great shot! The face (with its enigmatic look) is nicely framed by the texture of the scarf and hair, and it's well cropped (apart from obvious problem you mention). Link to comment
monika_madej 0 Posted February 3, 2004 Lewe oczko Kaki (to z blikiem)powinno byæ na maxa ostre.A ta smuga z prawej!!!!!!Normalnie nie mogê....ale ogólnie - fajne. :)m. Link to comment
ofey_kalakar 7 Posted April 4, 2004 Use a real B&W film to improve the contrast for example TriX 400 or PanF 50. Link to comment
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