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I'm relatively new to photography, so any comments and suggestions are greatly appreciated. Thank you.


chris_dawson

85mm F/1.8. Slight 5% burning in photoshop.


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You should have taken greater care that the horizon line stays ... horizontal !

Apart this, good shot, nice colors. The model and surf in the shadow are gorgeous.

 

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You are correct, the tilted horizon definately adds interest to the picture. The only (very slight) distraction I find is the wave extending from the models breast which slightly detracts from her form, but that's pretty minor in an otherwise beautiful image.
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Nice shot! I'd try it also (if possible) with the other model's body profile - rotating her at 180 degrees, so she is holding the board with her left hand. Blago
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Great idea - but: I'm not sure whether the tilted horizon was intentional; however, I find it distracting. I also am not happy about the surfer being on the right edge of the photo; IMO it would have been better to have the surfboard to the right, and the woman a bit left of the surfboard. The photo has nice colors, nice feel, and is definitely pleasing to look at!
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