magnum75 0 Posted January 10, 2004 This is a streetdancer. I tried to make a cool picture of him for the EXHALE fitness mag. Is it cool? Link to comment
davidmccracken 2 Posted January 11, 2004 Your timing and / or the fitness of the subject have resulted in you catching this at the right moment. Photographically the lights are extremely distracting. Cropping them out is not entirely successful as can be seen from my attempt to do so. Link to comment
tyler_buckley 0 Posted January 11, 2004 try cloning the lights out, i agree that this is a great moment to capture but the background is just to busy and distracting, in addition to the clone try to blur the background a bit. Link to comment
roger_smith4 2 Posted January 12, 2004 I don't like the crop because it weakens the triangle shape at the center of the picture. I that way, the lights add to the effect. If you want to make the subject more prominent, maybe play with depth of field or brightness levels. Link to comment
kobi 0 Posted January 13, 2004 The ceiling cross-beams and the hanging light fixtures contribute a strong sense of perspective to this composition, which transitions very effectively to the triangular lines of the model's pose. Perhaps a little background blur would make this better, but surely not the cropping and cloning suggested above. Great photo. -- kobi Link to comment
magnum75 0 Posted January 15, 2004 thanks for your advice. I will keep the picture as original. Link to comment
stevie pics 0 Posted April 8, 2008 Magnus, I suppose it is a risk of putting a picture on a site such as this that someone will come along and say 'oh, I can make that better'. It's an amazing b***dy capture and that's far more important than a bit of background clutter. Nice work indeed. Stevie Pics Photography Link to comment
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