frankl 6 Posted June 19, 2001 nice shapes and details, but the clouds behind the stairway could use a bit of dodging or contrast enhancement to stand out more against the stairwell. keep experimenting. Link to comment
andy_kidd 0 Posted June 19, 2001 I think more definition in the clouds could be interesting but i think it has a nice graphic effect as is. Link to comment
theresaann 0 Posted June 20, 2001 I really like the lines in this photo. The photo is very symmetrical and most of the lines (and lines that make up the angles you see) are straight. But then there's this little loop formed by the turning of the hand rail at each level that catches your eye and provides an interesting "twist" (pardon the pun). Great Job!I just wish those elongated X's you see were a little more in focus.I disagree about the clouds. I think if they were more defined it would distract from the main focus which I see as the lines, angles and curves. I think if those elongated x's were more in focus your eye would be drawn to them and you wouldn't be thinking about those clouds. Link to comment
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