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Sea Side in the Sky (Ver II Straighted)


fredericpascual

I propose this new crop and composition. See the original in my comment. The original is No mani`pulated. The new one is manipulated. The version II has a straight horizon line comparing the original.


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Veo la idea interesante, pero no se si hay que enderezarla (creo que la linea de la arena no era horizontal) y no se si los caballeros del fondo estan bien ahí o hubiera sido mejor posicionarlos formalmente encima de los brazos de la cruz.
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A mi me parece preciosa , absolutamente subrealista y la chistera del señor del fonde le da un toque magistral.
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Pena no sepas volar y sacar de mas arriba... jeje!! A mi me gustan las 2... pero... los hombres, como el horizonte ligeramente inclinado me sobran... me distraen... Necesitas una escalela... o te propongo otra cosa... sacarle al cristo desde arriba como Dalí. ¿No era paisano? :D
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Has elegido un compromiso muy bueno entre la inclinación del mar y de la arena, aunque un purista diria que el mar nunca puede estar inclinado. Dejala asi que esta muy conseguida.
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Original set up and angle Frederic... I like the XIX Century-look-alike people. I prefer from far the VII Straighted from the one posted in the comments.

Why: Crop is too tight with an apparent tilt (not corrected by the horizon line). the people in the middle just above the Christ head are just breaking the balance and are nearly too distracting. the 4th grey pers is also distracting (3 is a better number and all black is also better)... IMHO!

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for your comment and overall for the comments about my two versions. It's a shame that something wrong appear during the film process, because I think I lost contrast. It's also my first roll with my new Lens
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Superb image. If I am correct and this is a sand sculpture what a fantastic opportunity for a series of images. The tide coming in and it washing away, little by little. Complete image viewed as a montage.
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