Guest Guest Posted December 21, 2003 Toning, framing, and expression are wonderful. For more effective balance and impact I suggest a square format, from the boustiere ties to the mirror dowel post. Link to comment
clane 0 Posted December 21, 2003 i don't know about the square suggestion. maybe just crop some of the white on the left off, make it more balanced. but the shaded train on the left is very nice. out of focus, it offsets the in focused part. good expression good moment. maybe dodge a little in the lower right of the mirror Link to comment
marcel_weisink 0 Posted December 21, 2003 I think it would even look better if you took a little from the right. Link to comment
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