Experiencing with my figure.

One thing that bugs me is the fact that she is standing right at the edge of the shot. Plus the really dark eyes. Also, it needs something to balance it out, like another model partially exiting the left side, so you just see her/his leg leaving the scene.

sorry Anne, I prefered the original. Keep posting though!

Question an artist's vision at your peril! I did and I have to think the version with the cut off feet is the stronger of the two.

I too liked the original much better...and I liked it a lot !

Really like it. How did you do it. Please share with me! Is this a self portrait?

nice experimentation - approved :)

Lightpainging? Nice one anyway :) I love your sense of minimalism in your work.