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Not to keen on expression, need a lot of help in the creative fashion

department - any ideas/advise most welcome

 

Cheers

Leave it as is, I think it works. It may not be the expression you planned, but when that happens in a good shot the only thing you need to change is your title!

I like the colors and the setting. Unfortunately, I am constantly drawn to the horizontal white line that appears to be cutting off the head of the model in the foreground at the neck. Please take my comments with a grain of salt as I am a complete novice. I think that if this line were somehow minimized this would be a much better picture.

LOL - Good call on the title/expression thing

I agree with the line thing as well!

 

Thanks Again

The door way is a little distracting, i think the model needed to be about 1' further to the left of frame to include the vertical plane of the door, this not cutting her shoulders