Bangkok Delight Umbrellas

Stephen, I like everything about this except the ceiling fan. The composition otherwise is good, with the umbrellas in all corners [duller, supporting colors] and then the brighter ones front and center. Could you do a version w/o the fan and see how it looks?

Fan has to go.....play w/ the crop.....

Hi Linda, Sarah...

With the two of you unanimous that the fan and rest of ceiling has got to go, who am I to object? Playing with the idea, I see that you two are right. I got the same unanimous opinions on this photo posted on usefilm.com, as well!

Here are two more versions, one simply with the background forced to black, and another with a cloned in umbrella in an attempt to balance the edges a bit more

What do you think?

Thanks!

SteveR

Hi Stephen. Definitely like it better sans fan. Personally, I like the first revision...as is... no fan. This shot really has some good potential...how about another version...

I like this version...the new crop and no fan! 6/6.......

I like the original photo most. The fan doesn't distract me. The composition and colours are fine. It is pleasing to look at. But I can imagina that some people like to temove the fan.

Does my comment help???

Regards,

 

Bram