My girlfriend Chrystal

Should I crop some of the right side and top or does it give the

viewera sense of the location?

i think its ok with the right and top of the picture - the problem lies in the girl`s clothing - there`s no much detail in it.

otherwise fine

How true! A story may be told, but I doubt if the essence of the tale is based on mood. My feeling is that there is a very deep and meaningful love between the photographer and the subject. The story I see tells of two people who together discovered a passion for photography- and for eachother. I am certain that these two people will have a long, happy relationship, and that both people's passion will continue to find common subjects :) (I love you Philippe)

Even pull back just a little while kepping subject in the corner....;)....J

I found you because I was thinking about Chrystal, I miss her. I didn?t know you took photos too. Your work is fantastic and I think you truly captured her, how we knew her, when no one was looking.