Carolina

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I think light is too harsh. There are many reflections on her skin and there is a big shadow on her eyes, eyes that seem to be really nice. I would try using a reflector and softer light.

Beautiful model, great facial expression. Your lighting seems to be two equally spaced lights. The effect is not gentle enough for the subject. You might want to try softer sources, such as umbrellas, soft boxes, etc. Try unequal spacing of the lights for the effect on texture of the skin.