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This picture has a wonderful mood with lighting to match and I would have rated it higher if it was not for too much sharpening applied in post processing.   

I like the expression in her face. Beautiful portrait.

Looks great as a tiny pic.  But viewed large, the eyes-- especially her right-- are haunting.  I'm sure she's not that way in person!  Her eyes were likely your focus point, so perhaps the final image doesn't need much sharpening?  Keep it simple, they say.