Model on rock

I've been taking pictures of the same model in all locations. Am I on

the right track? Check out my folder if you want. thanks!

The pose makes her look fat and she looks very uncomfortable. Get a lot closer, concentrate on the face, upper body or full body but not more. Check out some of the other images with models and keep trying!!

The pose the model is in looks unnatural and out of context with the surroundings. Also it looks over-exposed on my monitor.

Hi. I checked out your folders. I think in general they seem over-posed and the lighting is not good. I almost like the one with the guy sitting on the ground without a shirt. I'd try to work with him more...your girl models just seem so uncomfortable. Absolutely stay away from mid-day light! Get up early or wait until after 4 or so. Keep trying...it can take some time to find your niche.

Thanks for the coments. I learnd the hard way that noon is a bad time to shoot! The model is my wife and she is helping me get better before I take pictures of others. Thanks Jill for looking at my other pictures. I took them all in the same day The male was helping us and I just could not resest taking some of him. I am going to take more of bolth people and maybe I will get some good ones.