Model on rr. tracks

Wondering what people thought? What could I do better?

It would be better without sunglasses. It would be better to make her bigger in the scene by making the picture wider. You could try adding some action to the scene by having her trying to get away from someone who has grabbed her ankle. More natural clothing might help -- say cut-off jeans, an unbuttoned blouse, and bra.

Please, make your model lay somewhere else! That had to be uncomfortable. The picture is fine enough, but the model's attire seems totally out of place.

I am trying! The next time I am going to try morning or evening the light is to harsh at this time of day. The model is my wife and is trying to help me get better before I take pictures of other people. She thinks next time she should wear bib coverals with no top just the coveralls with a rail road cap. Oh And cosmo. I think tying her up might work good to but what should she wear? :) Oh and Christopher she is getting tanner.

try to meter on the model. It seems you metered on the dark gravel between the tracks rather than on her skin, which caused the overexposure.

Most cameras have and exposure lock button you can use. Meter the model, press the button and move to compose the shot.