First try for love while sunset

Interesting image

Any comments are welcome. I tried to express innocence and warmth but different than the typical pink way.

This picture intended to tell a story.

I feel that you completed your intended purpose..great job.

This is a nice idea. I'd have liked to see the boy and girl closer together. Without the faces, the fact that they are together needs to be emphasised in some other way to fully convey your intention for the image. Good thinking though!