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Grace I - D60_7304 crop


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Exposure Date: 2015:04:21 18:27:59;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D600;
ExposureTime: 1/125 s;
FNumber: f/11;
ISOSpeedRatings: 200;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: 4294967290/6;
MeteringMode: Spot;
Flash: Flash fired, compulsory flash mode, return light not detected;
FocalLength: 52 mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 52 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows);


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All around this is a nice photo, I like the light and the treatment and the pose is a pleasing "S" shape. The one suggestion that I would like to make is to change the head position. One of the most important aspects of a portrait is the face, and a very important aspect of the face is to get a nice jawline. Here the jawline disappears into the neck. Raising the head so it is more vertical would create more jawline and additionally would ease the tension on the neck muscles making them less prominent and more feminine in my opinion. Overall great work!

Best Regards,

Peter

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