Isis

Despite the central composition, I've received very good feedback

from this picture. Please comment, as most people who've seen it

have no professional opinion to offer. Thanks!

Main thing I like, and the first thing that I noticed was the clean smooth curve of the hairline against the body, along with how much of the model's face we see... very nice. Main thing that I dislike is the contrast between the smooth body and somewhat boney hands (especially with the harsh shadows on the upper left hand).

Lighting, lighting, lighting. With this lighting, there is very little texture and depth to the form. Needs lighting more from her right and a hair light might make a better image. Lighting is to hot also. James

I like the pose a lot, Jeremy. The model's hands wrapped around her body that way gives the pose a little something extra, liquid and understatedly sensual.

James, James, James. Tell me, how come so many critical posters have 0 uploaded images? I particularly liked the image. The light landed so nicely on her hair, you could count them (Herbal Essence?). A snoot for the hair would have detracted from the low key/simple lighting for the subject.