Schanae Jellick, May 2014

Would love some constructive criticism,

Thanks :)

It feels a little tightly cropped on top and the wallpaper behind her has a nice design that seems to help create some atmosphere/mood so I would have included a little more on top. It's a fairly static composition, her taking up so much of the vertical framing without much breathing room and her head is centered horizontally in that space which makes things feel less dynamic. The lighting is nice as is the gesture of her hand against her face. Great shoes. The ring on her lower hand is a bit much and a more interesting chair might have helped.

What Fred said...

(Did I really just agree with Fred?!)