Une belle histoire

Too much hairlight or just about right? What else could be done to

make this better?

I'm not taking my clothes off! :)

The Model

Ms. Warden

My comment was not meant to offend. The question asked of the photographer was what could be done to make the photo better. I only gave my honest opinoin. I have seen numerous of your work here on photo net. Most of it pretty good. But not, in my worthless opinion, of a fine art class. And then we see work by Amy Powers and katrina O'leary that it exquisite, and I think party so because they are confident of who they are and confident of their beauty and their sensuality and their worthiness to have their bodies depicted as art. Your body looks as worthy from what we have seen of it. Why not allow your photographer to see what he can do with that incredible beauty. Why not share that beauty that God gave you just as the flowers and the trees share theirs. Kevin

Some catchlight would be nice.

Also, the background is still a bit distracting. Although it is already out of focus, the texture/reflection from the trees competes for attention.