people (portraits & fashion) Adriana Talavera

Really keen to get some feedback - don't hold back, let me know what you think - don't

need to be positive, just be constructive.

Thanks

Well, technically it is good. Or good enough, in focus and no serious defects of that kind that would make one delete it from a collection... The thing I feel is that I am not sure what you were after in this shot, Russell. Were you? I ask w no disrespect... A display of an unusual bodice and shoes and dress or a presentation of a lovely model figure. Something seems to clash with something and I can't tell what exactly off the bat. Perhaps the black background makes it almost too sharp and focused making the color of the skirt jump to attention, which seems to uypstage the leather or vinyl brassiere and neckpiece and the ensemble does not ensemble. If it were a dark brown I dunno...Her pose to me is so so. Not bad but not telling in any way for flattery. What more can I say that is constructive but not dismissive... I am sure others will come to the rescue of this unusual image. I wish I could like it. Sorry. I wish you well. -g-