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The first day with the 200 mm f/4 Micro Nikkor.

Your comments and suggestions are greatly appreciated

Here is another possibility 

Lots of dodge and burn, vignetting the corners and extending the right side.

Thank you for your viewing and suggestions.  Looking at the image now, I realize I cropped it too close on the right hand side.  I had played around with the vignetting before uploading; looking at it now, the reason I didn't use more vignetting as probably that the radius was too large and was darkening more of the print than I wanted.  I really appreciate your suggestions, even when I approach the image differently than you, your comments always make me review what I did and why.  Thanks again, Phil