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Into battle


kenb

Exposure Date: 2013:11:22 15:31:58;
Make: Panasonic;
Model: DMC-G3;
ExposureTime: 1/640 s;
FNumber: f/10;
ISOSpeedRatings: 200;
ExposureProgram: Aperture priority;
ExposureBiasValue: 0/100;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 22 mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 44 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 5.7 (Windows);


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Hi Ken, this can become a hell of an image if you consider the following:

A) The big wave splash seems a bit unnatural, too high and too uniform
B) The sunset colors should stay behind the ship
C) The fires on the canons are not realistic. They exists only the moment the shells leave the barrel so if you insist on having them the smoke should be much-much more dense and dynamic.
D) The flags seem rather in resting position while the size of the waves indicate really strong winds at this time.

It is such an interesting and unique image that worths investing a bit more time just to make it perfect i guess.

Keep on shooting (or firing in this case).

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