portrait5

need your comments

motion blur; soft; frame unnecessary

Everything he said. Also, the position looks unnatural. Even if it wasn't forced, it looks it. Portraits, especially with hands involved, are not as easy as they look. You should take more time and keep trying different positions. cheers

Focus would help.

hmmmmm...now dis particular person has stolen my best frenz heart...so no hard words !!! :o)

but speakin frm a photographer's point of view(so wat if amateur??)....hand shud hav been a bit lowered for better exposure an facial expression shud b deeper.....i mean its veryyy tensed... though looks a bit engrossed... ne waz.... realyy gud!!!!!