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I was walking along the beach and as I looked into the sun I saw 4

sisters playing in the sea with the sun at their backs, as a cool

fog bank started coming in. I tryied to capture the moment and

failed for the most part, although the picture is still pleasant.

Any ideas on what I could have done to make it better?

BTW - There are a series of shots, but in this one the eldest girl

is helping the youngest with her ensemble, I thought this was sort

of a touching moment, but it's probably not communicated effectively.