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Exposure Date: 2013:04:28 08:37:58;
Copyright: ;
Make: FUJIFILM;
Model: FinePix SL300;
ExposureTime: 10/600 s;
FNumber: f/11;
ISOSpeedRatings: 64;
ExposureProgram: Normal program;
ExposureBiasValue: 0/100;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 9 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows;
ExifGpsLatitude: 48 49 48 48;
ExifGpsLatitudeRef: R98;

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photogagog

Hi AJ,

 

Overall, i like the concept and think you did a good job at executing it. One thing that i think may be a distraction is the stem. It looks awkward where it meets the "water." Rather than coming out of the water, it seems that it's leaning up against the water's edge. I think if you created some minor reflection beyond the harsh demarcation of the waters edge, maybe subtly extend it into the distance, or added a slight curvature to the seam where the water meets the stem OR brought the flower down so that it looks like it's partially submerged it would give it a more "natural" rather than manufactured feel.

 

--PatrickD

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