don_crandall 0 Posted September 19, 2003 Crop and make it smaller, the lines are great Link to comment
g1 0 Posted September 19, 2003 Closing in for a tighter frame would improve this picture for me, and perhaps positioning so that the person isn't so central. Is there blood on their arm? Link to comment
t._n._williams 0 Posted September 19, 2003 I would crop out the ceiling, there does seem to be a lot of dead space. That being said, I love the image. It looks like the scene taken straight out of high school. A lowly teen dejected, haunting the halls alone. Broken heart? Peer Pressure? Bully? Thanks for the flashbacks. tn Link to comment
tat1 0 Posted September 19, 2003 Nice composition. I think croppping out some of the ceiling would add more impact to your photo. It is a little distracting. I like not being able to see the subjects face. Allure and mystery.... Link to comment
atomix 0 Posted September 22, 2003 I follow your indication about the picture and now is so good............for me.......... Thank a lot Link to comment
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