stephen fair 0 Posted September 16, 2003 Try cropping a little off the bottom to eliminate the odd triangle of background Link to comment
michael_ward1 0 Posted September 17, 2003 I wonder if the softness was deliberate. It really works in this picture. The delicate texture of the leaf is conveyed far better than it would have been had the picture been sharper. I think this would be better with the center thingy (stem?) running corner to corner. Pointing the camera up just a tad would have been nice, but at this point some cropping could do the trick. Link to comment
fred_j._lord 0 Posted September 17, 2003 Taking away the edge of the leaf makes this image a very strong abstraction. It's amazing how much the small change affects the way I see this. It's a very nice job, Jim, of seeing and capturing a different viewpoint. Link to comment
jim schwaiger 0 Posted September 17, 2003 I did try chopping out the triangle after scanning, but I decided to leave it in so it would be less abstract.It would probably be better if the corner was all black. The leaf was backlit which must be why it appears so soft. The only other possibility is that the leaf was moving, but this is doubtful as I took 3 shots at different apertures and they all have this look to them. The toughest part here was selecting the point of focus; the top right edge was just an inch or two from the lens. Link to comment
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