Local conflict

Thanks

Very powerful picture.

This Idea had the makings of a very good picture and subject. But it needs changing somewhere.Somthing doesn't look right.Perhaps a re-working is needed.

Might it be that the terrain is level, and the 'chessboard' is a bit inclined? That could be the reason that it doesn't look completely right.

 

Ivo

I am agree that I have to change something,but I don't know what yet.

Very creative.

The perspective of the upper part

should be changed . I would also tilt the

black figures. The shadows should be with

lower transp.