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Major mistake: the background is sharper than the subject and thus draws more attention. That's about the best that I can say about this picture.

For your information: there are millions of untrainted users who can 'play' with Photoshop, achieve similar (if not better) results, be endlessly proud of themselves until someone like me exiles them from Utopia.

Even though it is one of the most negative, it is still one of the best critiques I have got i here... The thing you are telling me, is something I can use.

Now I know a little more about making pictures of people. Thank you!!