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Interesting combination of figures, there is a sense of space (left), of movement (right), but neither the two people nor the ornamental plants seem able to bring in a convincing sense of life. Congrats.

A very nice result, Tom!

Good eye and nice use of technique and composition.

Interesting combination of spaces!

Hi Tom,

I don't know if you did it on purpose (apart from just submitting them together) but this image, the "graffiti" one with the old lady in white and the graffiti of a black cat, and the one of the cyclist (taken, I guess in the same place as this one) ended up together in my critique queue, and impressed me very much, because they share, I felt, a common feeling of blurred humans, almost ghosts, in an space where they do not belong, as if they were but memories of a time in which somebody inhabited a now empty place. In this sense they appear as ominous and very powerful, and convinces me more and more that a way should exist on PNet for people to present and critique series of images linked by some common purpose. Of course, albums do this in part, but one cannot critique or comment on an album, and, worse, one cannot request a critique on it, as a coherent whole that tries to be more than the simple sum of its parts.

Anyway, of the three, this one is perhaps the best for me. It is almost as if two different times were superimposed, as in a double exposure, with the same man first appearing at the top of the stair, then passing out if the scene on the right. The division of the space in what are almost two different scenes makes this even more effective. A very well seen image. Congrats!