ronald_otto 0 Posted May 15, 2001 It's a good photo. Yet she doesn't grab me. Very good technically though. Link to comment
GerrySiegel 868 Posted May 16, 2001 Did you do any shooting without the hat? I would love to see that face framed with just hair. And if it were a hat, I'd be happier with a yellow straw with a multi-colored fiesta like band. (Gut reactions, but that is acceptable kind, huh?)GS Link to comment
GerrySiegel 868 Posted May 16, 2001 Javier, the model is exquisite. I have had a lot of trouble using hats as props. Most of the time I fail. Once in a while I feel it adds to the portrait. I like the Model 2 (your other) very much more, with the exception of the out of focus rock on the right. Next time have a plant handy to move in front of distracting rocks. Having a model off center is good, even very good and I will have to remember that in my hobby portraits. Good luck. Gerry Link to comment
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